Developing a Short Film Idea

What kind of narrative are you exploring?

Enigma


 Five Finger Pitch-

Genre: Thriller

Protagonist: Detective

Goal: To solve a case by looking through clues, which become increasingly ambiguous, disturbing, strange and hard to piece together. The detective can visualise the crime that took place, based on what he knows about it.

Obstacle:  The clues eventually reveal that he is more closely related to the case than he had originally thought.

Why is it different/important?: It is a minimalistic story on a small scale that can cover a wide scope.


Biggest short film influence: The Grandmother, Meshes of the Afternoon, La Jetee

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